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more than wind

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my low tides, opposite winds, this newest cold -
a distant change, thus Voltaire's cause & effect.
neither lack his optimisms.
i've never needed Aristotle's Law or discovery of the moon.
she told me with a lesser shine, her dulled wits, her love like sold.
seasons are so long.
wrote it in florida. it needs some inprovement.
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TomtheIdealist's avatar
'My low tides" - I love it.
I love the entire long-winded, personal,, self-indulgent stream-of-consciousness style of writing, in fact. But this is a good example too. :)
Very easy to get lost in.